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aliveness

December 5, 2011 By Tracey Clark

In the end

you won’t be known

for the things you did

or what you built,

or what you said.

 

You won’t even be known

for the love given

or the hearts saved,

 

because in the end you won’t be known.

 

You won’t be asked, by a vast creator full of light:

What did you do to be known?

 

You will be asked: Did you know it,

this place, this journey?

 

What there is to know can’t be written.

Something between crispness of air

And glint in her eye

And texture of the orange peel.

 

What you’ll want a thousand years from now is this:

A memory that beats like a heart—

A travel memory, of what it was like to walk here,

alive and warm and textured within.

 

Sweet brightness, aliveness, take-me-now-ness that is life.

 

You are here to pay attention. That is enough.

 

-Tara Sophia Mohr

 

Today, as we continue to savor the moments, we encourage you to pay attention through your lens. Share a thought, a word, an image where you’re focused on this  “sweet brightness, aliveness, take-me-now-ness that is life.”

………..

In the End is one of the poems featured in Your Other Names, the new book of poetry by Tara Sophia Mohr. She is graciously giving away a copy of her exquisite book today. All you have to do is leave a comment between now and midnight tonight EST (12/5).

For more information about Tara, visit her website. And for more information about her book visit the Your Other Names web page. We’d like to thank Tara for sharing In the End with us here, just as she shared a poem with us almost a year ago. It’s always pleasure to have her.

Comments

  1. Kim B. says

    December 5, 2011 at 8:29 am

    Beautiful poem. I was touched.

  2. Marina D-K says

    December 5, 2011 at 8:35 am

    Beautiful. Hit very close to home having lost a loved one very recently…thank you

  3. Marcie says

    December 5, 2011 at 9:15 am

    Here's my 'savored' moment – both in word..and in image:
    http://www.marciescudderphotography.com/home/2011/12/4/a-silent-pause.html

    And – what a beautiful poem by Tara!!! So very inspiring.,,,

  4. xanthe says

    December 5, 2011 at 9:39 am

    Gosh, that is beautiful…. wonderful start to a Monday x.

  5. Ana Eugenio says

    December 5, 2011 at 11:26 am

    I started my week paying attention ๐Ÿ™‚ so serendipitous! http://dreamyproject.blogspot.com/2011/12/view-from-here.html

  6. Veronica M. says

    December 5, 2011 at 11:30 am

    I love that, "A memory that beats like a heart" , "you are here to pay attention". I love this poem. A very nice choice for this season and for a Monday!

  7. anngeedee says

    December 5, 2011 at 11:57 am

    I love that line – "You are here to pay attention." I think that's what my camera helps me do. I'd love to read more of what she has written. I'm sure it's all beautiful.

  8. Juju says

    December 5, 2011 at 12:08 pm

    I zeroed in on that last line, too. It's like a news flash from the cosmos. "You are here to pay attention. That is enough." Yes, because if we pay attention, then everything else we need to do will follow. How can you not love a line like that? Thanks for introducing me to a new poet!

  9. Jenny says

    December 5, 2011 at 12:29 pm

    Such a beautiful reminder…here is my image to savor
    http://www.flickr.com/photos/goshohemlock/5324160791/in/set-72157625747795346/

  10. chelle says

    December 5, 2011 at 1:12 pm

    what a beautiful poet, i'd love to read some more..

    by the lake, savoring the wind on a rough day

    'we are here to pay attention'

    http://www.flickr.com/photos/magnetisedbylife/6459410741/in/photostream

  11. Gotta Run says

    December 5, 2011 at 1:43 pm

    wow, what a n incredibly thought-provoking poem. thank you for sharing it with us.
    http://www.flickr.com/photos/gottarun2009/6092390209/in/set-72157627535058945

  12. Rambling Heather says

    December 5, 2011 at 2:15 pm

    What a lovely poem!! I'd love to win that book. Thanks for these inspiring posts and words. Today I will savor the moments!

  13. Kate says

    December 5, 2011 at 2:49 pm

    Wow, such a Monday morning treat, thank you for sharing!

  14. Mary says

    December 5, 2011 at 2:56 pm

    I love the poem. After an emotionally tough 2011, I have been focusing on what is enough and paying attention

  15. melissa says

    December 5, 2011 at 3:18 pm

    tracey and tara together…what bliss. thank you for the exquisite and generous offering.

  16. Alexis Yael says

    December 5, 2011 at 3:44 pm

    Here is my paying attention from yesterday: http://www.alexis-yael.com/2011/12/believe.html

  17. sarah says

    December 5, 2011 at 3:51 pm

    i needed that reminder: pay attention, that is enough.
    thank you.

  18. marina says

    December 5, 2011 at 3:52 pm

    thank you for this poem and this post, they are so welcome!
    and the last line, "You are here to pay attention. That is enough.", is one I would like to keep with me. it feels like it opens up my heart.
    I have gone over to Tara's site and read few more poems, they are amazing! and with yours and other wonderful photographers images, wow!!!
    thank you for this chance to win such a wonderful book!

  19. Kendra says

    December 5, 2011 at 4:04 pm

    Wow, "Your Other Names". Nothing rings more true to me. I have had many names and have often thought the one given to me was so limited to describe who I am. I've had several in my life, for different groups and different times. Interesting. I will certainly be looking for her book.

  20. Andrea says

    December 5, 2011 at 5:00 pm

    Oh my gosh! That poem really touched me- I am putting this book on my Christmas list! (unless I get lucky, that is!) ๐Ÿ™‚ here's an image where I really focused on life's "take-me-now-ness"…

    It may look like just a leaf to some people, but when I was seeing it, I was breathless:

    http://www.flickr.com/photos/lifelovelittlethings/6274370541/in/photostream

  21. Anna says

    December 5, 2011 at 5:05 pm

    Lovely poem! I'm paying attention, savoring the moment of finishing some creative studio projects.

    http://vandemarkdesigns.blogspot.com/2011/12/finish-line.html

  22. Lee Ann says

    December 5, 2011 at 7:07 pm

    Gorgeous. Thank you xo

  23. Amelia says

    December 5, 2011 at 7:18 pm

    this is beautiful, love it

  24. carolann says

    December 5, 2011 at 7:34 pm

    beautifully written words; and yes, pay attention. pay close attention.

  25. Val Curtis says

    December 5, 2011 at 8:56 pm

    So perfect for seeing 2011 out. That was my thought as I took this photo today. It is completely unedited. It was just this amazing.

    http://www.mental-chew.com/2011/12/hello-winter.html

  26. Anna Dykema says

    December 5, 2011 at 9:18 pm

    words to live by. thank you. ๐Ÿ™‚

  27. Libertad Leal says

    December 5, 2011 at 10:11 pm

    Oh what a gloriously beautiful poem. The last sentence made me think long and hard. It is so very true. Here is my image, in which I am savoring every messy, chaotic, imperfect but delicious and alive minute of decorating the Christmas tree with my daughters. A self portrait part of my "Everyday Mother" series:

    http://www.flickr.com/photos/libertadleal/6460516607

  28. Laura says

    December 5, 2011 at 11:35 pm

    That poem is so beautiful and oh so true. I never get tired of the reminder to pay attention and relish right here, right now.

  29. Tammy Lee Bradley says

    December 5, 2011 at 11:35 pm

    Wonderful poem. This is the reason I focus my lens on capturing the quiet beauty of everyday moments. xo tam

  30. Holly {Soupatraveler} says

    December 5, 2011 at 11:51 pm

    Love that girl…she's got the best mind, the best heart, and the best things to say. Wish i coulda gone to her retreat in San Fran right after camp! Here's a moment that was pretty awesome: http://www.flickr.com/photos/soupatraveler/6462661501/

  31. Chelsea says

    December 6, 2011 at 12:56 am

    What a touching poem I love it

  32. Heather says

    December 6, 2011 at 2:21 am

    Still savoring the winter light while it lasts…. http://www.flickr.com/photos/heather-cox/6462328219/in/photostream thank you for the poem, I loved it.

  33. Shelley says

    December 6, 2011 at 2:55 am

    Wow, if we could all take these words to heart. Can't wait to read more, thank you for introducing us.

  34. hillary says

    December 6, 2011 at 3:40 am

    tara's poem takes my breath away!

  35. Julia Perry says

    December 6, 2011 at 3:41 am

    perfect. exactly where i am today. tara, thank you.

  36. Betty Thompson says

    December 6, 2011 at 4:21 am

    Amen- we are here to pay attention spiritually and emotionally surfing and thriving!

  37. Betty Thompson says

    December 6, 2011 at 4:23 am

    **SURVIVING** although surfing would be fun too! ; )

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    December 6, 2011 at 6:39 am

    Beautiful words. Simply beautiful.

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